Wednesday, 2 November 2011

life.

why bother?
people are always struggling to stand tall
but in the end it just keeps crashing down upon them
each time when you think you have your balance
Your grasp on everything
it just topples you over again
you see everything around you rise and fall 
over and over again
a never ending cycle
you notice your might is only so strong
but dont worry.
your not the only one. . .
eventually the best of us crash and burn.
A lot of us realize
your limits can only take so much 
and before you know it
your just a twisted wreck struggling to see the surface

2 comments:

  1. An interesting poem... full of pessimism and soaked in angst. Interesting also the use of water and how this links with cycles. Does this mean that this question of "why bother" will inevitable return?

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  2. the point in my eyes why bother most times when it comes to life. You always strive towards something and the thing you have to realize no matter how good you do there is always someone better. Which brings me back to why bother. Probably not a good thing to not bother but sometimes it's really questionable

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